Once upon a time, there was a girl named Ruby. One day, her mother told her that they are going to a pool place called “Summer Wishes” Ruby was happy to go! The next day, they went to the pool. She had lots of fun but when it was the time to go to a upside down swirly slide, Ruby was so scared but her big sister Moonstone, teased her so ruby had to go. Ruby had a feeling that something is going to be wrong on the ride. Trust it, it is never wrong! When it had started, it started to row slowly across a river then it happened! A waterfall was in front of them! Ruby was so scared and can you believe it? Moonstone was biting her nails as we got closer and closer to the scary bit. When they were at the edge at the waterfall, Ruby began to prey and she said this`` God? Are you there? It is me Ruby. Please make me safe. I am too young to--`` But before she could finish her prey, they went down!!! Ruby heard lots of screaming and crying which is coming mostly from her sister but also ruby. When it came to a water swirl, at the top (which is upside down), Ruby fell off her seat and went through a secret hole at the bottom. Moonstone was crying for sister but ruby could not hear her. In the hole, ruby saw herself in a dark room. Suddenly, she heard a noise. It was a sound of a star twinkling! Ruby decided to walk closer to the noise then she walked and walked and walked until she found a little star which transformed into a sparkly fairy! She said ``Do not be afraid my child, I will help you back to land if you could say yes to the scariest ride on earth! `` Ruby had no choice but say yes. She went at the start of the ride and it started really scary! There were monsters trying to grab her but they faded away when they were about to touch her. Then it went down a waterfall but not like the one on the ride before, it was straight down!!! After the waterfall, the ride was already nearly over! They had to go to a very hot place with people throwing hot coal but when it touched her, it turned into mushrooms straight away! Now it was finessed! The fairy quickly turned herself into a star again and gave Ruby a chocolate drink. Ruby drank it and in no time, she was at the popcorn stand just right next to her family! What a day she had and soon enough that scary ride that she rode at land was vanished and Ruby got on with her life.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!
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very nice story :)
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